Sunday, June 28, 2009

Poem(HOME LEARNING)

Absences, by Donald Justice
It's snowing this afternoon and there are no flowers.
There is only this sound of falling, quiet and remote,
Like the memory of scales descending the white keys
Of a childhood piano
--outside the window, palms!
And the heavy head of the cereus, inclining,
Soon to let down its white or yellow-white.
These poor snow-flowers in a heap,
Is the memory of a white dress cast down . . .
So much has fallen.
And I, who have listened for a step
All afternoon, hear it now, but already falling away,
Already in memory.
And the terrible scales descending
On the silent piano; the snow; and the absent flowers abounding.


Hyperbole, metaphor and simile is used in this poem.

HYPERBOLE---It means that the poem is told in an overexaggerate manner. In this case, the absence is told in that manner. For example, the "only this sound of falling, quiet and remote", "poor snow-flowers in a heap", "already falling away, already in memory". This overexaggerate the fact that it was snowing and there were no flowers left. The poet chose this because it leaves the reader with a greater impact as compared to the unexaggerated one.

METAPHOR---It means taking two things seemingly unrelated and combine them together. In this poem, white dress and snow-flowers are combined together, "these poor snow flowers in a heap, is the memory of a white dress cast down." The poet chose this as it will stir up more interest in the reader, and would continue to read on or leave him with a good impression.

SIMILE---It has the same meaning as metaphor, but only uses "like, as or when". Here, an example would be "There is only this sound of falling, quiet and remote, Like the memory of scales descending the white keys of a childhood piano."The poet chose this because it will make the poem more meaningful and interesting, and the reader might inevitably imagine those things in his mind.


I like this poem because it describes the absence very impactful, as if it's like the end of the world. It also uses some metaphors and similes, thus the poem is quite interesting. It is also fairly easy to understand the poem, for the poet does not use bombastic words or describe things that I have never heard of before. Even though he uses hyperbole, he did not "over-hyperbole" it, such that it became too unrealistic or something out of the world. So, I feel that this is a very good poem as the poet used a seemingly usual thing and turned it to a masterpiece!

~106 words

Thursday, June 4, 2009

Micro-fiction 2


A boy is making his passport.
"What your name?"
"Erm... I don't know."
"Come on! You gotta know your name!"
"I don't have one."
"Everyone's got a name!"
"Tomas."
"Good."
"Tsk."Irritated, he continues. "Maybe tomboy, tomgirl, atom, or even atomic!"
"Okay... Which one do you want to put on your passport?"
"Mmm... atomic tomborl."

~55 words

Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Reflection of Term 2

Blogging was more fun in term 2 than term 1. There are more interesting things to talk like WeRead, Microfiction etc. I always liked blogging homework for it not only relaxes your mind, there is always a stretch of time for me to do it! In addition, you will get ace. Hope more will come...

~55 words

Red Storm Rising(review)


The story is a war thriller. It is about a conventional ground war between NATO and the Warsaw Pact. Clancy suggests that several conventional ideas about a ground conflict between modern armies are wrong. For example, he proposes that munitions expenditures would be far higher than projected; that combat helicopters like the AH-64 Apache and the Mi-24 Hind are not as powerful as expected.
The story moves around in rotation, probably about different scenarios being played out in the build up to and aftermath of a Soviet pre emptive strike against NATO forces in the European theatre and naval forces in the North Atlantic.
The story is told in a more descriptive way than in dialog form. In addition, the fighting scenes are brilliantly described and there are lots of military jargons in the story, which Clacy did go to some lengths to explain. Thus, this book is a good read for all, except maybe for those who do not like wars. Even so, page turning from beginning to end is recommended.

Friday, May 22, 2009

Micro-fiction

"Yes! I'm free! No more zoo for me... Now, I can have a suntan!"
"Ahhh.... My lunch is haunting me!"

"Why is everyone running away? Well, at least I can bask my pink skin under the sun."

"Ahhh.... I'm starving. Hey, that roasted pig looks appetizing." (46 words)



Thursday, April 30, 2009

Comments on WeRead

The main attractiveness of this book is the reviews. People who wants to buy the book need not go down to the bookshop to browse through it. Instead, he or she could just view the reviews from WeRead. This would be more convenient to him or her and save the person time and energy. He can also order the books online through Amazon for convienience. The book also would be delivered right to the doorstep too!(Although he would have to pay for a higher price and he would have to wait a long time for it. )
WeRead also allows other viewers to see which books are popular and can choose to borrow it from the library. This allows the viewers to view the books they think they would want to borrow and can just go to the library straight away. They can just pick the book and borrow it. Quick and easy!
Thus, WeRead is good for it allows people to save time and effort to go and do things which could be done easily at WeRead.

Monday, April 20, 2009

Inerview of parent---favourite book


My father's favourite book is none other than Timeline, written by Michael Crichton. The book is about a group of science undergraduates time travelling back in time to medieval Europe. Armed with theirhistory knowledge, they managed to change some of the historicals events, but not the final outcome. This perhaps shows that history cannot be altered even with time travel. Time travel opens up many paradoxes for example if you go back in time and kill your parents, how would you exist?

This is probably why my father liked that book, for it was also a science fiction book. Well, actually, I also wanted to read that book, for it sounded like an enticing read. It maysound like a fantasy, but the book uses existing knowledges to support the possibility of time travel to the past. It is every's persons inner wish to travel back in time, armed with knowledge of the pasts, hence giving him a advantage to live his life as compared to the rest.

Besides this, Micheal Crichton had also written other science fiction books which my father also loved to read like Prey, Next, Sphere, The Running Man, Jurassic Park etc. Many of his books were made into popular movies. Thus, Michael Crichton could have said to be one of the best authors.