Wednesday, January 20, 2010

Story time!


A father had just bought a new car, he was gleaming happily about it. Everyday, he would drive to work in his car, and everyday he would drive back from work.
One day, his son was carving something on his father's car. "Hehehehehehehehe... Dad would love this!"
His father was really mad (like Leoj when he was shot in the face, or if he was) when he saw his car.
"My car... What did you do to my car! I'll... I'll kill you!"
His father then used the knife and cut his son hand. (Sounds bloody... Luckily it was just the fingers...)
"Waaa..."
His son was crying, and his father felt guilty. After all it was just a car. After he had bandaged his son, he went back to the car to inspect the damage. His son wrote, "I Love Dad."
P.S. Leoj is a fictitious character. He is supposed to be someone really tall, and it is for fun. :)

Did this ever happened to you? You meant something good to happen and in the end what you got was unfavourable. 好心没好报。You do good things and it turned out to be undesirable. It certainly did happen to Leoj. Poor Leoj. Now he is crying, he had lent some mousehunt ( a game)
gold to a friend and the friend did not return back. Quite a hefty sum too. Sighs... Poor Leoj. Now he will never lend anyone mousehunt gold again. (Did not really happen... Just for fun :D)

6 comments:

  1. Yeah, sometimes it happens. I'm trying to teach this thing to someone and then that person just doesn't listen and interrupts, trying to irritate me with his sarcasm. That wasn't really nice. (:

    I did not know that happened to Leoj, but wasn't he suppose to be a fictitious character? Kinda confusing for the ignorant reader.

    Good luck for your blogging!

    Cheers!

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  2. Nice story. I find it quite touching actually! The father was too impulsive. Violence is never the best option. Poor boy. ): I pity the car more though. I hope it's paintwork wasn't affected! :D

    I agree with the moral too! We sometimes do something out of goodwill, but what we get is a cold response from the person we helped. Well, life is like that. :/ Nice debut post anyway!

    Mattheus

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  3. Impresive story with loads of hidden meanings. Perhaps you should work towards that direction in your blog posts. Enjoyed the lesson that you were trying to teach me.

    I enjoyed the moral of the story like Mattheus and Yue Jun. Keep up the good work.

    P.S Follow my blog too!

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  4. Exotic story.Nice implementation of Mousehunt into the story.Yup,that morale in life occurs all the time.It pretty much surrounds us and unknowingly integrates into our society.However,his father using a knife to cut his son's hand is pretty unbelievable though it happens once in a blue moon.However, maybe you should blog more about their feelings too.That would make it a whole lot interesting.
    So,3 cheers for the post!

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  5. Nice Story! This story is both a happy and a sad one. I pity the boy though. He loves his dad a lot. He merely wanted to show his affection for his dad. However, he does not know the right way to do it, and resorts to carving it on his father's car. I also think that his father should not be so impulsive.

    This situation often happens in life. When we try to help someone, we end up getting scolded if we help them and they are not satisfied with it.

    Nice post! Hope to see more =D

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  6. A very simple story, yet one filled with many hidden morals or meanings. The boy in his story wanted to show his love for his father but was not mature enough to understand that his actions were wrong. This has happened for me before and i can understand the feelings of the boy.While some people states that his father was too impulsive, I do not agree so. How would you feel if your car worth ten th
    thousands of dollars was wrecked?Anger?Sadness? It is understandable that his emotions would overwhelm him and cause him to react in a violent way. Also, the implemented use of mousehunt in your blog post would certainly attract more readers as mousehunt is very popular in Hwa Chong and other secondary school.
    Good luck on your blogging, hope to see more such posts in the near future.

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